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The Best Damn Thing- Crossdresser! Reader X Prussia Chpt 18

Okay it’s official I cannot make any promises with any quick updates but I can only promise you that I will NOT ever forget you lovely readers! Well I hope you saw those pictures of Adrian and Drake because they appear to be the bad guys and it’d be nice to have an image of what they look like. Other than that there’s gonna be quite a lot of music in this one but no spoilers! Go ahead and read on my lovelies~!

Well I hope you all  ENJOY~!! :3

“Okay (Surname), I’m going to see what I’m up against so I’ll let an amateur like you sing first.” Adrian said snidely as he gave you a stupid smirk and you sneered at him.

“Nice contest man, I’m glad to see it’s real original.” You snarked at him remembering that one movie you saw.

“Hey! I’m not the dope who write this script.” He broke the fourth wall, to everyone else’s shock but you didn’t bat an eye.

“Yeah but the ‘dope’ made you unoriginal and bland~.” You teased him with a sneer on your face and he growled at you.

“Just hurry up and sing you tone-deaf dumbass!”

“Fine! See how an awesome singer really is.” You gloated back at him to see how he’d react and you got what you wanted because he was glaring at you.

“Okay, the rest of the A-capella singers here will give you a score of your voice. Now feel free to sing a song of your choice, faggot.” He remarked and then you perked up but not in a good way once he called you a faggot. It was only okay when Gilbert said it but it was starting to piss you off any time somebody else said it.

“Nobody calls (Male Name) a faggot except for me!” Gilbert thought angrily as he glared at Adrian from where he was standing with the rest of your audience.

“Fine.” You said through clenched teeth; this guy was just asking you to knock him out already. Despite how badly you wanted to you had to push any violent thoughts away and come up with a song to sing and quick. Then you thought about it…

“Here I go. For a friend.” You said and winked at no one in particular to the crowd and then you brought out your (type of music player/ I-phone) and put it on the song for you to sing. Unknowingly making quite a few guys in your audience to wonder just WHICH friend you were referring to.

When I was younger, I saw, my daddy cry
And curse at the wind
He broke his own heart, as I watched
As he tried to reassemble it,
And my momma swore
She would never let herself forget,
And that was the day that I promised
I’d never sing of love, if it does not exist

But, darling,
You are the only exception
You are the only exception
You are the only exception
You are the only exception

Adrian scoffed at your singing voice and sneered with a haughty expression; this made sense for a fag like you. A sweet and silly little love song that apparently would impress all the other fags in this room.

The other A-capella singers looked fairly impressed with your voice,  Adrian saw their faces and he was annoyed by this as he rolled his eyes.

Feliks and the A.S.K weren’t shy about cheering for you like fan-girls. “THAT’S MY BESTIE! WOO-HOO!”

“YOU’RE SO HOT (MALE NAME)!” Cheered the A.S.K as the fawned and drooled over you.

Oooh, oh, heeey,ooh…

I've got a tight grip on reality
But I can’t let go of what’s in front of me here
I know you’re leaving In the morning, when you wake up
Leave me with some kind of proof it’s not a dream

Ooh oh ooh oh…

The BTT seemed pretty into your singing, Gilbert was getting into it… he didn’t like it but at the same time he didn’t really mind it… you had a pretty voice too… like a girl’s… you sounded like a girl... you were cute enough to be a girl…

NEIN! NEIN! GET LOST GAY THOUGHTS! He shook his head and even lightly punched himself in the head a few times with both hands. You were definitely NOT cute! Your voice was NOT pretty! And you were NOT cute overall! And he’s NOT gay!

Arthur was almost as captivated as Gilbert was with your voice; except he wasn’t sexually frustrated right now because he had just found out earlier today that you were a girl. Now that he knows that, seeing you up there singing that pretty song… only made you seem even more like a woman in his eyes.

You are the only exception
You are the only exception
You are the only exception
You are the only exceptiooon…

You are the only exception
You are the only exception

You are the only exception,
You are the only exception,
And I’m on my way to believing

Oh, and I’m on my way to believing…

You had finished the song and you felt pretty confident about how you did, it had gotten easier to sing in front of these guys since you’d done it a few times before.

Adrian kept a dissatisfied and unimpressed frown but then he saw that Drake looked slightly impressed to the point where he started clapping and smiling in approval of how you did. Along with the rest of Adrian’s a-capella singers who nodded and clapped; they’re not supposed to be clapping for you!

“Way to go bro!” Alfred certainly wasn’t shy about cheering for you, Matthew cheered for you as well but he was much quieter than Al.  Arthur chose to clap rather than cheer all the while smiling; he was actually smiling for you! Speaking of which Feliks resembled a cheerleader in terms of energy as he clapped and fawned over how amazing and cute you were, Toris kept a smile and clapped for you as much as the singers did.

The BTT clapped for you, albeit rather vigorously but they weren’t swooning nearly as much as the ASK were right now; funny thing is Gilbert was conflicted on how he was starting to feel about you whilst Andrew was completely head over hills for you. The only thing those two had in common right now is that they thought you were cute…

“No, no, no! You cheated, you had music on, you can’t sing a-capella with music. Only your voice.” Adrian stormed towards you as he complained.

“Hold up boy.” You brought your hand out in front of his face, “You never said this was a-capella, you just said that you’re gonna give us a genre of music for us to sing and that’s it. I didn’t hear a-capella and besides I refuse to sing that kind of thing. Not just cuz it’s a little gay even for me but because it ain’t exactly my cup of tea.” You crossed your arms with your nose in the air, you’ve never really sang a-capella before so you didn’t expect yourself to be good at it.

“What? No I-!” Adrian was about to argue with you until Ludwig got in between.

“Nein, (Male Name)’s right, you never said zhat the two of you had to sing a-capella. (Male Name) didn’t cheat he’s played fair so far, so you’d better do zhe same.” Ludwig instructed, his sheer size along with his deep, commanding voice had intimidated Adrian into backing down and to carry on with the competition. Ludwig thought of it as immature but that doesn’t mean Adrian has to disregard the rules of it. It was his idea after all.

“Fine, fine… Hm. You’re mediocre at best (Surname).”  Adrian kept a straight face, deciding to be passive aggressive but it still ticked you off. What a bitch this guy is…

“On a score of 1 to 10 (Male Name) you get an 8.” Said the second in command of the A-capella boys, you nodded even though you weren’t entirely satisfied with your score.

“I’m not sure what your definition of ‘awesome’ is.” Adrian fluttered his fingers at awesome, “ But eh, most people are satisfied with what they already have, and that goes for those with dull talent.”

Your fists clenched and you were getting this close to going over to him and socking his face in, Help me God, or any other spiritual being help you. Cuz you know you’re about to beat his ass!

“Me on the other hand, I practice every day and my talent is exceptional. Not your run-of-the-mill skills. I’ll show you.” You shook your head at his words that dripped with vanity, his bad attitude all too visible for your friends to see and frown in reprehension at said attitude.

If music is what you were going to use then Adrian would do the same, and he’d choose a song that related to the genre you chose: A silly little love song.

He pointed to Drake and in response he turned n the stereo that the singers had when practicing.

Oh, her eyes, her eyes make the stars look like they're not shinin'
Her hair, her hair falls perfectly without her tryin'
She's so beautiful
And I tell her everyday

“That’s a good song…” You thought glumly, because such a good song to be sung by such a bad apple.  Also… the guy was good… just not in personality that’s the only flaw…

Gilbert wasn’t impressed by this guy’s voice, even if he had talent it was his nasty disposition that would throw people off.

Yeah, I know, I know when I compliment her, she won't believe me
And it's so, it's so sad to think that she don't see what I see
But every time she asks me do I look okay?
I say
When I see your face
There's not a thing that I would change
'Cause you're amazing
Just the way you are

Drake nodded affirmatively and along with the song, he had heard his ‘friend’ sing before but still the guy had talent and it couldn’t be denied. As for his team they weren’t surprised, of course he was singing great that’s why they made him leader. They just wish he was a little nicer that’s all.

And when you smile
The whole world stops and stares for awhile
'Cause girl, you're amazing
Just the way you are, yeah

You lightly growled under your breath,  this guy WAS good… he wasn’t just talking out of his ass but he was still being asshole-ish about it… Okay maybe you shouldn’t be talking because you and Gilbert were a bit bad like that when it came to bragging but at least you guys didn’t feel superior or nasty to others about it. Even if it made you seem like a hypocrite right now, this guy was over all a HUGE jerkass so that was all that mattered right now!

Adrian smirked as he finished and awaited an applause so he could say ‘no applause, no applause’ but instead…

“AH-CHOO!”  Adrian cringed and shut his eyes at that sudden sneeze from… he didn’t know who did it but whoever it was is going to get it! Trying to mock him huh?!

He looked around and saw Arthur rubbing his nose and sniffling, but he wasn’t happy at all. Your smile twisted into a grin and then into an uproarious laugh, “Pfft~~! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA~!” You held your stomach not just at Adrian’s so called applause but also from the look on his face when Arthur sneezed.

“How dare you?! And how dare you?!” He pointed at Arthur and then at you with an extremely infuriated face, but you all you did was snicker at how dumb he looked with how he was getting angry over something very petty.

“Bless you Arthur.” You completely ignored the whiny Adrian and paid more care towards your British friend.

“Thank you (Male Name). At least someone’s not being rude.” He snarked referring to Adrian.

“Hey! You don’t just sneeze after MY performance! Way to mock someone and as for everyone else! Where’s the applause?!” He ranted and then he expected a positive reaction from the others and they finally clapped like they were going to but they couldn’t because they were startled by Arthur’s sneeze.

“Drama-Queen~!” Feliks chimed from the audience obviously in disapproval of Adrian’s attitude.

“What’s with you? He can’t help it.” You shrugged simply even if Adrian was giving everyone a hard time.

“Well I don’t like it!” He complained with both his fists clenched.

“Okay calm down Veruca Salt.” You tried to ease him but it was really mockery; hence why you called him Veruca Salt the bratty girl from that Chocolate Factory movie.
Adrian ignored your insult and awaited the results from the others, “Excellent as usual Adrian.” Drake gave him a thumbs up along with the other A-capella boys.

“I know.” Was all Adrian had to say to Drake, not even a thanks and a hint of modesty.

“Though remember you’re still competing with (Male Name) you haven’t exactly won yet. But your performance was incredible. That’s a score of 9. ” The second in command of the A-capella boys spoke up, Adrian frowning at the mention of him ‘not winning yet’ but he still nodded and smirked that his score was higher than yours; to your dismay.

“Now Drake please continue.”

“Thank you okay (Male Name), you have to sing a perverted pop song.” Drake smirked at the choice and you frowned.

“Really? Come on are you serious?” You asked incredulously, you knew PLENTY of perverted songs but did you really have to sing them in front of your guy-friends. Feliks was an exception but doing that in front of the other guys would be embarrassing.

“Yes I am. Unless you’d rather quit.” He suggested but he didn’t sound as condescending as Adrian would have.

“No way Draco! I don’t quit!” You suddenly yelled.

“It’s Drake!” He yelled back, great now you calling him Draco was going to stick.

You sighed deeply; a little exaggeratedly but still what you were going to sing would humiliate almost as bad as how you danced at the party…

“Fine. Here’s your perverted song bitches.” Was your last sentence to the now offended singers before you started to sing.

Caught in a bad romance
Caught in a bad romance

Want your bad romance

Want your bad romance

While you sang your heart out all you could do was ignore some of the snickers you heard from the crowd and the weird looks you had received from some of them, how embarrassing…

Ludwig didn’t look too impressed with the way everyone else was laughing at you despite the song, instead he kept a straight face and cheered you on quietly to himself.

Matthew did the same and now he was starting get worried about you, in that you’re gonna get made fun of by some of these meaner students.

“Like I don’t see why everyone’s giving her those nasty looks I think she’s fantastic~!” Feliks chirped while everyone kept sniggering and staring.

“Maybe it’s because not everyone has the same taste… but (Your Name)’s got this… I believe in her. She can shake this off better than I can…” Toris thought aloud but luckily only Feliks could hear. He seemed to be putting himself down a bit but he was actually stronger than he thought he was; given how even when Ivan only teased him and didn’t bully him as bad as he did before, he could still grin and bear with it.

I want your horror
I want your design
‘Cause you're a criminal
As long as you're mine
I want your love
(Love-love-love I want your love-uuhh)

“Kesesese~!” Your eye twitched once you heard Gilbert snickering out loud to the point where he just burst out laughing; lucky you can multitask by singing and glaring at the albino at the same time.  

You know that I want you
And you know that I need you
I want it bad, your bad romance

You pointed at him while he kept laughing at you. Antonio and Francis shared a few giggles, which of course made you even madder and embarrassed you even further.
You’re so NOT sharing any takeout food with two of those three tonight!

I want your love and
I want your revenge
You and me could write a bad romance

You kept on singing while you started to reach down to pull off your left shoe; everyone was confused as to why you were doing that but they knew they’d find out soon enough. You carried your shoe and then you threw it toward Gilbert and hard; hard enough at least.

“Ah!” He yelled once your shoe hit him right in his ‘awesome’ face. You wanted to laugh but you focused more on your singing but you mentally smirked once you heard the other guys chortling at how you just hit Gilbert.

I want your love and
All your lovers' revenge
You and me could write a bad romance!

“And Stop!” Drake called and put his hand out to let you know it was time for you to stop.  He gave you an amused look though you were sure it was because of the song you decided to sing.

Until someone started clapping, but slowly.

A slow clap? What a real smart ass, and you had a feeling you knew who it was.

Adrian ‘applauded’ you as he clapped nice and slow to let you know that he was being sarcastic, “Bravo (Male Name) (Surname) you’ve made other gay guys everywhere look straight. And as a bonus you’ve outdone Lady Gaga in the department of making yourself look like a complete fool.” He criticized you but rather than criticism he was just being a complete and total ass but his words did NOT fail at pissing you off.

Adrian started to laugh haughtily until he felt something hit him in the back of his head, but you noticed that it was a shoe; it wasn’t yours though.

“Hey Arschloch you need to vork on zhat attitude, so unawesome.” It was Gilbert who had thrown that shoe at him, and it was his shoe no less. You smiled, because he was standing up for you again. It was unexpected but this only meant that you two were friends after all.

“You shut your mouth! This isn’t your contest.” Adrian sneered at Gilbert but it was your turn to stand in.

“You’re the one who needs to shut your mouth, don’t you talk to my friends like that!” You fumed but you kept yourself from stomping towards the guy to beat him to a pulp.

“I can talk however I want to anyone.” He declared but nobody liked the way he was coming off at all.

“(Male Name) your score for that one was another 8.” Drake said for the second in command for the A-capella boys.

“Oh come on now, he did great and I think ya’ll are just covering for the other guy, it’s hardly fair.” The DJ a.k.a  DJ said from your audience and you nodded vigorously in agreement.

“YES! Exactly DJ!”  

“Oh no, no. We’re fair and completely honest we’re not going to give Adrian the higher score because he’s part of the team.” The second in command said and you looked slightly skeptical but he sounded honest enough.

“Jason, you’re supposed to take my side!” You heard Adrian’s hushed whisper to the guy who just spoke.

“That wouldn’t be fair Adrian.” The guy known as Jason asserted, he didn’t look too fond of Adrian’s attitude either but he was able to stand his ground.

“Oh fine whatever, I’m totally capable of beating him anyway.” Adrian shrugged and then took your place in the middle of the stage to start his song.

“Adrian you’re going to sing a break-up song.” Drake said and then Adrian nodded all the while he continued to stare at his friend.

He thought for about 10 seconds and then he had it! This would induce some nostalgia.

I'm doin' this tonight,
You're probably gonna start a fight.
I know this can't be right.
Hey baby come on,
I loved you endlessly,
When you weren't there for me.

You gasped lightly and then you stared at Feliks in the crowd who wore the same agape  expression as you, “Nsync…” You both said at the same time with dreamy voices, only to be completely turned off by the fact that Adrian was the one singing.

So now it's time to leave and make it alone
I know that I can't take no more
It ain't no lie
I wanna see you out that door
Baby, bye, bye, bye...

“Zhat group broke up right?” Gilbert asked Francis, whom in return nodded.

“Oui, but zat handsome Timberlake boy is all zhe talk.” He informed and then he remembered that one song Timberlake sang, it was a song that reminded him of himself.

That ‘Sexy Back’ song, might as well have been all about Francis.

Bye Bye
Don't wanna be a fool for you
Just another player in your game for two
You may hate me but it ain't no lie,
Baby, bye, bye, bye...
Bye Bye
Don't really wanna make it tough,
I just wanna tell you that I had enough.
It might sound crazy,
But it ain't no lie,
Baby, bye, bye, bye

“And Stop!” Drake said to Adrian and they both exchanged smug nods because they knew that Adrian had this in the bag.

Jason and the other a-capella singers were seen discussing Adrian’s performance and then he finally spoke, “Adrian, your score is an 8 for this one.”

You were kind of expecting Adrian to throw a fit over his score being less than his last but he only looked like he was about to. He was fuming but he managed to keep his cool. Then just to spite him you threw a raspberry at him.

“UGH! What are you a 5th grader?!” He yelled and pointed at you, being just as childish as you.  

“What are you a 4th grader?” You asked back, sure it was kind of repeating what he said but he was TWICE as immature as you were.

“That’s what I just said!”

“Well I say it better!” You barked back and right on cue you smirked at the now annoyed Gilbert.

“HEY! (Male Name)! I said zhat earlier today!” He didn’t look too happy but hey, he did the same thing to you first!

“Well you stole my line first!” This time you pointed at him, the other singers looked amused by how you two were bickering but Drake was the only one who looked fairly irked.

“Excuse me! If we want to continue this contest I kindly suggest that you two please shut up so you can go on.” He put his hands up to settle you two down and reluctantly you stopped and frowned that you couldn’t bicker further with Gilbert. Speaking of which Gilbert sneered at you and you just stuck the tongue at him.

“Okay (Male Name), Now I’d like you to sing cock-pop.” He brushed the front of his glaring glasses at the bridge and you grimaced at the genre.

“Oh come on!” You complained, but for some reason you were getting a feeling that they were making you sing these weird songs on purpose. Probably to make you look bad…

“You have to sing it.” Drake crossed his arms.

“First of all, the fact that you’re telling the gay kid to sing such a genre with a name like that is demeaning and offensive. Don’t you discriminate against me and my fellow gays by making me sing such a genre.” You proclaimed with a frown as you crossed your arms, despite the fact that almost every other guy knew that you were lying but you had to keep up the act.

“Do it, faggot!” Adrian barked with a miffed look on his face, getting rather impatient. You were annoyed when he said ‘faggot’ but it provoked Gilbert more, Ludwig had to hold him back from going up there to punch his face in.

“Homophobe!” You spat at him, which would hopefully make him look bad in front of his peers.

“Vest, let me go! You know he deserves it!” Gilbert hissed while he struggled to get out of his taller but younger brother’s strong grasp.

“I know bruder but it’s like you told (Male Name) earlier, he’s not vorth it.” Ludwig had an understanding look on his face; he didn’t like Adrian at all either but he honestly wasn’t worth their time. Although he was uncertain and still wanted to him the guy, Gilbert nodded and calmed down enough for Ludwig to let him go.

“Here I go.” You said and then you thought of a song not as belittling, cock-pop is what Ke$ha called her album but you still found it a bit raunchy for a genre name and the fact that you had to sing one of those songs.

We're the ones who flirt with disaster,
On your ass we'll pounce like a panther.
Cut the bullshit out with a dagger,
With a dagger, with a dagger.
Do or die we all gonna stay young,
Shoot the lights out like a machine gun.
Think it's time for a revolution,
Revolution, revolution.

We were born to break the doors down,
Fight until the end.
It's something that's inside of us,
It's, how we've always been, yeah.

Warrior, -rior, -rior,
Warrior, -rior!
Warrior, -rior, -rior,
Warrior, -rior, ow!

“Stop!” Drake called again with his hand out and you nodded obediently, and then you lightly snarled at Adrian’s smirk.

“9. For an assertive choice of song.” Jason announced with a proud look on his face, you smiled. These guys were starting to like you a bit too, so that’s good and it would piss Adrian off.

“Thank you~.” You thanked him breezily.

“That’s our boy.” DJ smiled and nodded at you with a thumbs up.

“Hell yeah, way to go (Male Name)!” Alfred raised his fist in the air and you shot him a thumbs up.

“You’re great (Male Name)!” Matthew ‘cheered’ with a smile on his face that you smiled at, freaking adorable.

“Yeah holla at your boy!” You grinned at your three friends and you all shot each other a cool pose (minus Matthew). Arthur shook his head at how silly the four of you were being but he also kept a small smile to himself, he was actually pretty happy  for all of you.

“(Male Name)!” Antonio chirped with his hand out for you to high-five and you went over to him and you happily did so, then you went to a smiling Francis to high-five him too.

“My broski knows how to rock!” Feliks cheered for you along with Toris, “You really do.”Toris smiled as he clapped and you walked over to where your two closest friends were and gave them each high-fives.

Then you simpered at the bright and peppy A.S.K as the cheered for you like fangirls, “Dudes, dudes I’ve got plenty of (Male Name) for all three of you.” You flirted with them a little bit; you were actually just playing but you had no idea that they all actually had crushes on you.

“(Male Name)…!” Andrew blushed as you winked at him, and he felt so close to you…!

Finally he’s been meaning to be this close to you!

Then you heard a cough and you turned to see Gilbert covering his mouth, “Fag Alert!” He said through his ‘cough’, oh you see how it is.

“Ehehehehe~!” You mock-laughed at his little insult and then you playfully punched him the shoulder, to Andrew’s chagrin.

Damn him! He totally ruined his moment of being so close to you!

“Hey! Enough already! You got your score, now shut up so I can go next!” Adrian fumed and even started to throw a small tantrum that you couldn’t help but snigger at. Wow and you thought Gilbert was childish.

Drake couldn’t help but feel just slightly embarrassed at how Adrian was acting up but he kept a straight face, “Okay Adrian now you have to sing a post-grunge song.”

“All right.” He said and then started the music, that started off a familiar song to you.

I took a walk around the world
To ease my troubled mind
I left my body lying somewhere
In the sands of time
But I watched the world float
To the dark side of the moon

I feel there is nothing I can do, yeah

You dropped your mouth ever so slightly, how come he gets to sing all the good songs? It wasn’t very fair to you…

“3 doors down… I SO like those guys too…” Feliks muttered to Toris whom nodded in agreement.

“Feliks I have a feeling that something’s up… I mean Luna and Mark aren’t the nicest guys in the world but for some reason… I don’t think something’s right…” Toris thought, feeling worried about you. Why is that you were singing the songs that some other people didn’t agree with and not Adrian?

Unless they’re just testing your tolerance and willingness to sing songs that not everybody really likes.

“Yeah Liet, I know they’re like, complete dick-heads.” Feliks wasn’t entirely aware of Toris’ suspicions but even he himself was getting slightly suspicious over this whole thing? All he knew is that Adrian wasn’t to be trusted cuz he’s like, such a bastard. And as for Drake? Eh… he likes the color of his super cute bowtie but… he’s one of Adrian’s goons.

I watched the world float
To the dark side of the moon
After all I knew it had to be
Something to do with you
I really don’t mind what happens now and then
As long as you’ll be my friend at the end

If I go crazy then will you still
Call me Superman
If I’m alive and well, will you be
There a-holding my hand
I’ll keep you by my side
With my superhuman might

“Stop!” Drake called again with his hand out and you nodded obediently, and then you lightly snarled at Adrian’s smirk.

“Strong chords, that’s another 8 though.” Jason said but Adrian wasn’t as peeved as before and still kept a confident smile; he had a 9 unlike you so he assumed he was good.

“Damn! He’s good, he’s not awesome like (Male Name) though…” Gilbert thought angrily until he realized he just called you awesome! What the hell?! He’d never call you awesome! That’s his thing! Thank Gott he didn’t say it out loud though…

That would have been embarrassing.

“Okay (Male Name), now your next genre to sing is Disco Pop.” Drake said, thank goodness! Not something that would degrade you.

“Thank you Draco.” You smiled and gave him a thumbs up, ‘Draco’ in return glared at you, “It’s Drake!”

“Yeah, yeah but I think I’ve got one.” You nodded feeling a bit confident, luckily this one wouldn’t embarrass you.

Fill the void up with celluloid
Take a picture, I'm with the boys
Get what I want cause I ask for it
Not because I'm really that deserving of it

Living life like I'm in a plane
In the limelight I want to stay
I know I've got a big ego
I really don't get why it's such a big deal, though

Going up, going down, down, down
Anything, for the crown, crown, crown
When the lights going down, down, down
I spin around

Cause I'm a primadonna girl, yeah
All I ever wanted was the world
I can't help that I need it all
The primadonna life, the rise and fall
You say that I'm kinda difficult
But it's always someone else's fault
Got you wrapped around my finger, babe
You can count on me to misbehave

“Stop!” Drake called again with his hand out and you nodded obediently, and then you lightly snarled at Adrian’s smirk.

“Mundane~.” Adrian sang to himself over your talent, even though he thought you didn’t have any.

“8, but good choice for personality.” Jason nodded in approval, if you didn’t know any better you’d say that he was praising you a bit; and it made you kind of happy especially since he’s with Adrian.

Adrian rolled his eyes again, but then again Jason was probably giving you this praise to boost your confidence so that way it can be ultimately crushed when he blows you off the stage. The thought made Adrian smirk an evil smirk; a smirk that a madman usually wore.

“Vay to go (Male Name)!” Gilbert yelled with an ear-to-ear grin and his fist pumped in the air, last thing he wanted was Adrian to get confident about beating you. Like hell he’d let that happen.

“Thanks a lot, guy!” You wore a crooked smile this time, it was nice that Gilbert was praising you a bit but this is the most you’ve heard him do so.

“Ehem!” Adrian coughed to catch your attention despite the annoyed scowl on your face, then he smiled wickedly.

“Kay now it’s my turn again.”

“Sing dance-pop.” Drake told him and once again Adrian grinned smugly, he just keeps getting all the easy ones.

I can't win, I can't reign
I will never win this game
Without you, without you
I am lost, I am vain,
I will never be the same
Without you, without you

“I hate this guy…!” You thought with clenched fists, he really does get to sing all the good songs…! He’s got pretty decent taste in music but still!

“David Guetta… not a bad choice.” Francis thought and tried not to get into this guy’s actually fairly good voice.

Gilbert thought nothing of this guy because despite his voice it was his overall personality that made him a huge turn off. He waved to you and then he made a few gagging poses and pointed at Adrian, you sniggered at him and nodded to him.

I won't run, I won't fly
I will never make it by
Without you, without you
I can't rest, I can't fight
All I need is you and I,
Without you, without you

Oh oh oh!
You! You! You!
You! You! You!

“Stop.”  Adrian sure felt confident now, that was the best he’s sang so far but he sings great either way.

“9.” Jason told him and Adrian’s smirk didn’t cease to fade.

“Wow, that’s two 9s for me already and you only have one. Are you sure you’re as ‘awesome’ as you say you are?” He asked in that same condescending tone he used when he approached you earlier.

He REALLY wants to poke the bear doesn’t he? Fine, he asked for it.

“Hell yeah! But you’d better watch yourself boy cuz I’m-a knock you out the next time you wanna to insult me. And I ain’t frontin!” You looked angry and even took a few gangster poses, simply just to look cool.

“Whatever, I don’t think you’ve got it.” He said snidely and was amused at how dumb you were making yourself look.

“You look stupid.” Drake remarked and had a look of amusement on his face.

“Asshole’s askin’ for it.” Feliks said aloud and couldn’t get his mind off how cool you looked, you were acting boyish and gangbanger but you were still cool! Toris was amazed and once again marveled at how outgoing you could be in times like this.

Alfred and DJ thought you looked pretty badass, along with Gilbert who started to smirk at how Adrian looked totally uncool compared to you. Not that he’d admit you were cool though…  Matthew thought you were cool but he was hoping that nothing would get too confrontational…

“Whassup? Whassup bro?” You struck a few more poses, completely ignoring ‘Draco’ and you were intentionally trying to annoy Adrian with your awesome poses.

Arthur and Ludwig started to gloom at the poses you made, it was immature but at least you were standing your ground. However Antonio and Francis admired your confidence and knew that the moves you were making were something that Gilbert probably would’ve done.

“I’d tell you to stop and that you’re making a fool out of yourself but you’re just so good at that, there’s no point in me doing so.” Adrian smiled, a fake one at that.

“I’m right here bro, let’s go now.” You stood your ground and crossed your arms.

Adrian scowled at your confidence, “All right, now I’d like you to sing your precious Avril Lavigne.” He demanded even though he looked disgusted, without a doubt in your taste in music…

“Oh no he didn’t.” Feliks said and shook his head because he knew that would definitely piss you off, and he didn’t blame you because he loved her too! Toris sighed, now he’s in for it…

“HOW DARE YOU?!!” You screamed at him through the top of your lungs, yeah you were pissed! And every one of your friends knew that.

“He’s done for.” Gilbert said because he saw how angry you looked, oh well this bastard’s got it coming.

“Sing it come on!” Adrian was definitely challenging you now, since it was him who told you to sing and not Drake.

“I will!” You narrowed your eyes and thought for about 5 seconds and then you smirked evilly at the thought.

“I’ll sing a song from her all right.” You smiled for a bit, “Yo Gil my man! Record this for me!” You pointed to him and he looked at you with a confused look but then you winked at him mischievously and he smirked because he had a feeling this would be awesome.

“You’ve got it!” He said and then held up his phone to record it.

“Get on with it already!” Adrian yelled, getting impatient like he usually has been today.

“HALT DIE SCHNAUZE DE FLAGGE KIN DE WASHKIN SIE DUMMKOPF!” You pointed at Adrian as you yelled in a completely incoherent manner complete with a fake German accent and half the things you just said were fake German as well. Your accent was great but you kinda sucked at German, you only knew some of the insults in German because Gilbert’s yelled some of those at you before. Needless to say Adrian looked completely aghast and appalled at whatever it was you just said to him, had to be an insult of sorts.

Speaking of which Gilbert and Ludwig only looked mildly peeved at your accent and the fact that some of the things you said in ‘German’ were gibberish to them.

“Here ve go!” You said in the accent again to Gilbert’s slight annoyance but nonetheless he kept the phone on to record you like you said so.

Uh, yeah you can do it

You giggled a little bit, (just like in the song hahaha~!) because this was gonna be fun and hilarious.

“THAT’S RIGHT (MALE NAME) SHOW THAT LOSER!” Feliks raised his hands in the air, oh he knew what you were going to sing.

“What’s she singing?” Toris asked a bit curious, all he knew is that you seemed pretty confident right now.

“Her feelings.” Feliks gave Toris a smirk; that almost looked a bit flirtatious but still positive.

“Oh…” He said understanding a bit more even if he had a feeling it probably wouldn’t end very well.

I didn't give a damn what you say to me
I don't really care what you think of me
Cus either way you're gonna think what you believe
There's nothing you could say that would hurt me

Gil kept his smirk on as he heard the lyrics that came from your mouth, wow that’s a great way to get your feelings out to the guy you hate and he was glad that you were definitely directing these lyrics to Adrian and not him. Kesesese~…

I'm better off without you anyway
I thought it would be hard but I'm ok
I don't need you if you're gonna be that way
Because with me, it's all or nothing

I'm sick of this shit, don't deny
You're a waste of time
I'm sick of this shit, don't ask why

You pointed at Adrian with a wide leer on your face and his mouth to drop in shock at your actions, completely insulting him and addressing him as such and with a petty song too!

I hate you now
So go away from me
You're gone, so long
I can do better, I can do better
Hey, hey you
I found myself again
That's why you're gone
I can do better, I can do better

You put your hand to yourself to show that you thought you were better than him because you were in terms of attitude, this guy was an asshole.

You're so full of shit
I can't stand the way you act
I just can't comprehend
I don't think that you can handle it
I'm way over, over it

The BTT snickered at the blunt lyrics being sung because that’s honestly what everyone was thinking  about Adrian, Ludwig had to stifle a few chuckles along with Arthur. Wow… you were… you were definitely an amusing girl…

I will drink as much lemoncello as I can
And I'll do again and again
I don't really care what you have to say
Cus you know, you know you're nothing

(I'm so sick)
I'm sick of your shit, don't deny
You're a waste of time
I'm sick of your shit, don't ask why

I hate you now
So go away from me
You're gone, so long
I can do better, I can do better
Hey, hey you
I found myself again
That's why you're gone
I can do better, I can do better

Adrian growled, steam practically puffing from his ears as his face reddened with anger and embarrassment now that even Drake, Jason and the A-capella singers were laughing at him. Drake was laughing at him!

What'd you say
I told you so,
You know that
Cus I always know,
Get outta my face
Hey hey
You're not my taste
Hey hey
I am so
Sick of you
You're on my nerves
I want to puke
Get outta my face
Hey hey
You're not my taste
Hey hey,
Hey hey,
Hey hey

I hate you now
So go away from me
You're gone, so long
I can do better, I can do better
Hey, hey you
I found myself again
That's why you're gone
I can do better, I can do better

I hate you now
So go away from me
You're gone, so long
I can do better, I can do better
Hey, hey you
I found myself again
That's why you're gone
I can do better, I can do better

As soon as you were done, literally everyone (minus Adrian and Drake) burst in cheers and applause for you as you struck a few peace signs yelling, “BOOYAH!”

“All on tape! Smile for the camera loser!” Gilbert held up his phone and then flashed it in front of Adrian’s red and pissed off face.

“Don’t record me!” He fumed as you and Gilbert started chortling.

“You’re…! You’re all losers! That was tacky and childish (Surname)!” Okay he was throwing another tantrum because he was stamping his feet on the ground a few times now, to Drake’s embarrassment.

“Right I’m the childish one?” You grinned almost sadistically, enjoying his annoyance a little too much right now.

“Yeah you are!” He pointed at you again, what a hypocrite this guy is.

“Would you please stop yelling? You’re the one who’s acting like a brat right now.” Arthur stood in, crossing his arms and glaring at Adrian and then the latter walked closer towards Arthur with a grimace on his face.

“No one asked you. At least I’ve got people who like me.” Adrian smirked to Arthur whose mouth began to hang a bit open a bit.

“That’s right be surprised and… what are you doing?” He asked because Arthur had a funny looking face as if he was about to-

“AH-CHOO!”  He sneezed…

Right in Adrian’s face…

It was a total fluke but still…

Adrian stood there with a horrified expression that was decorated with tiny bits of spittle around his face.

“AAAHHH!! KIRKLAND GERMS!!” He screamed or rather shrieked like a little girl and even blew his hands to his face in disgust and horror.

“Not even I could scream that high…” You thought amusingly as Adrian kept screaming like a baby girl.

“EEEWW!!” He yelled and ran towards Drake babbling incoherently but the latter stood back from him looking quite revolted.

“Get away from me, too many germies!” He kept away from Adrian and then you started to laugh.

“Bless you Arthur.” You told Arthur and wiped a tear from your eye.

“Thank you (Male Name)…”

“Why are you telling him that?! When I’m the one who got sneezed on!”

“Don’t get mad and you’d better lay off dick-face, the dude’s sick.” You furrowed your eyes at how snotty Adrian was being.

“Sick?! I don’t care if he’s sick!” He was starting to sound like a brat but it only let you know just what kind of person he is, spoiled rotten.

“Hey dick, why are you such an A-hole? Instead of wasting our precious time, like why don’t you just finish throwing your little baby tantrum someplace else?” Feliks made his way over to you and snarked at Adrian.

“Shut your mouth you pink-wearing queer!” Adrian yelled and Feliks gasped looking hurt and offended at the slur he’d been called. Oh boy… he’s pissed you off a lot today but he just crossed the line…

“HEY!” You screamed and then you pushed him forward hard enough for him to land on the floor.

“You apologize to him right now!” You demanded as you stood over Adrian.

Instead Adrian stood and stared at you angrily, “Why you rotten little bitch!”

“YOU’RE THE BITCH!!” You bounced back and all the sudden you just freaking blew up at him as you charged towards him and started to punch and slap him, but Adrian was ready to fight back even if he wasn’t that great a fighter. Neither were you but you sure could hit someone if you had to.

“Get your nasty hands off my best friend!” Feliks yelled as he and a few other guys had to step in to stop you two from beating each other up.

So they were forced to have Ludwig step in…

“KNOCK IT OFF BOTH OF YOU!!” His voice boomed throughout the whole auditorium and everyone shrunk in intimidation.

It was silent for a long time and then you got away from Adrian and went over to Feliks and Toris whilst Adrian went over and hid behind Drake.

Jason went over to Ludwig, “Excuse me Beilschmidt. Please forgive me… I apologize for Adrian’s bad behavior…” He said with a look of shame on his face but Ludwig only softened slightly.

“Zhat’s all right… It’s not your fault. However you’d better tell him to vork on zhat attitude.” Ludwig admonished to an understanding Jason whom nodded obediently.

“Yes sir.” He said and then he, Adrian, Drake and the other A-capella boys left the room quietly.

“He didn’t have to call me sir…” Ludwig thought just a bit glumly…

Guess this means the contest is over?

For now…

~~~~~~~Time Skip of AWESOMENESS~~~~~~

After the A-capella guys had left you and your friends parted into different directions, right now you were walking down the hall with Ludwig, Gilbert, Toris and Feliks who kept his arm latched around yours and still looked a bit sad about what Adrian told him earlier.

“I didn’t mean to do that Ludwig but I mean come on!” You yelled, though that really sounded more like a complaint.

“I know (Male Name) but you don’t respond vith violence, he’s really not vorth zhe trouble. Und besides vhat if a teacher showed up and threatened to throw you out of here?” Ludwig asked you with a slightly disappointed look as your eyes diverted downwards with a slight pout, even if he was trying to advise you he still sounded like he was scolding you.

“Zhat may be Vest but zhat guy is such a bitch!” Gilbert spoke in your defense, sure Ludwig was right but he totally deserved the few punches and scratches you gave him.

“Maybe but we can’t afford to have anyone get in trouble because of him.” He advised and then you reluctantly nodded, the pout not leaving your face.

“There, there…” You told Feliks as you patted his head.

However Feliks flushed at your sudden touch, “I’m okay! Really! But still like… he didn’t have to say that… jerk-face…” He lowered his head a bit.

“Are you okay?” Toris asked, very concerned for his friend.

“I’m great. A little hurt but I’m okay.” He said to reassure the two of you even though neither of you really bought it.

“I’ll kick that guy’s ass for you how’s that sound?” You asked and then Feliks nodded to you with a smile, and then he pulled you into a sweet embrace; you happily hugged him back and tousled his blonde and as he liked to call it fabulous hair.

Toris joined in on the hug, that Gilbert and Ludwig couldn’t help but smile at.

“I’ve got to say (Male Name)… not bad. Not bad at all.” Gilbert said still smiling, and you kept your smile on. Gil often smirked but when he smiled he looked cute and even a little bit sweet.

“Thanks man, and also thanks for the shoe throw.” You thanked him and he started to snicker a little bit.

“Well nobody messes vith somebody who’s awesome.” Gilbert returned to his usual proud tone and your smile grew once you realized something.

“You just called me awesome!” You pointed to him, grinning widely as he started to blush. He did didn’t he?

“N-Nein I didn’t!” He stammered, blushing even more.

“Yeah you totally did.” Feliks smirked and put his arm around you and Toris nodded with a smile, "You did, I heard you."

“I did NOT!” He yelled back, his blush not dying down.

“Denial~! You think I’m awesome and YOOOUU know it~.” You teased him playfully and raised your eyebrows a few times.

“Hearing zhis makes me vish I didn’t say zhat! Und besides even if you are (Male Name), you’re still a faggot!” He said and you couldn’t help but smile now, at least Gilbert wasn’t thinking of Adrian too much to go back to calling you a faggot.

“Yup! I sure am~!” You beamed, to Gilbert’s amazement. However… for some reason that’s what he liked about you… not the faggot part! The way you can perk up like that…

Dammit! More gay thoughts! GO AWAY! (Male Name)’s right here!

Ludwig noticed his brother’s troubled demeanor and he was able to tell that he was without a doubt confused about you, and then he chuckled to himself. Just when were you going to tell him? Unless you’re deciding to be sadistic and you want to let Gilbert find out later on his own.

“Hey guys. I’ve got an idea why don’t we give ourselves a name?” You asked Feliks and Toris.

“You mean like a group name?” Toris asked, that sounds like it’d be fun.

“Totally!” Feliks agreed with a chirp.

“Okay cuz I was thinking and I came up with the greatest team name ever: Team SuperStar.” You said and put your hands out and waved them away like you were presenting something grand.

“Fabulous! I love it, we’re like the greatest superstars this school well EVER know.” Feliks chimed along with you and Toris smiled a bit sheepishly; he liked the name too and honestly he was just a little less outgoing than you and Feliks.

“Let’s give it our best shot.” Toris said with a positive voice and then you wrapped your arms around your two closest guy friends.

“Hell Yes!” You said exchanging glances with Feliks and Toris, “Hell to the Yes!” Feliks added a little more emphasis on the ‘Hell Yes.’

Gilbert and Ludwig stared at you three in wonder though Ludwig wore a small smile as he watched the three of you just being happy and friendly, he was happy for you three.

“Wow (Male Name) you really are a faggot.” Gilbert flashed a cocky grin but you kept your smile on because he didn’t really ruin the moment unlike how most other people would’ve thought.

“Yeah I know Mr. Awesome.” Once again you amazed Gilbert with your peppiness.

~~~~~~~Time Skip of AWESOMENESS~~~~~~

In your dorm-room you and Gilbert lied on your beds, for once you weren’t talking. Gilbert was listening to his I-pod and unknowingly singing out loud for you to hear but you were thinking to yourself and reflecting on today.

Today wasn’t that bad a day. Aside from that jerkass who wouldn’t leave you alone today, it was pretty good, a few dares done for shits and giggles, you got to sing your heart out today and you think you got to impress a lot of people today.

However… there was something you couldn’t quite get off your mind.

Slowly you sat up from your relaxed position on your bed and then put your legs down so you can stand to leave soon as you walked towards the door.

“Vhere are you going?” Gilbert’s voice called you as soon as you opened the door, turns out he noticed you.

“Nowhere important really.” You responded a bit slowly and smiled awkwardly, and Gilbert looked skeptical; he didn’t buy it.

“Why?” You asked and raised an eyebrow, since when did Gilbert start to care about you going elsewhere around the academy?

“N-No reason, just asking.” He said a bit hesitantly and then he kept his eyes diverted away from you.

“Oh Okay well I’ll see you in a minute I won’t be gone that long.” You said and then you and Gil exchanged waves back, but as soon as you left Gilbert was starting to wonder.

Just where were you going?
OH... MAH GOD... That took me FOREVER! I'm very sorry to all my patient readers but like I said I can't promise any quick updates (most of the time) but I don't forget you guys! WOW!! This one was REALLY long! And because of that and the fact that I left ya'll on a cliffhanger that makes people want to read more (i should know from experience) But yes it's a cliffhanger cuz I'm evil like that!

MWAHAHAHAHAHA~!! Oh... I'm very sorry...

Here are what Adrian and Drake look like in case you're curious:…
Sorry to those who already saw it.

Adrian's.... a jerk this chapter establishes that, he's a brat and he's spoiled judging by his behavior and nobody seems fond of his bad attitude, and at times not even 'Draco' or Drake to be precise. Man you sang like a songbird and it was AWESOME! A bit unfair but still awesome! Don't let Adrian push ya'll around cuz he's just a jerkface and you guys are AWESOME, Awesome as PRUSSIA! Poor England's got a bit of a cold...

LOL When the reader throws her shoe at Prussia that just made me remember that there was a similar scene like that in Mean Girls! HAHAHAHA~!

Also the 'German' that the reader spoke too, most of it was FAKE German, only words like 'dummkopf, Halt die Schnauze, and sie' are probably the only real German words.

Dummkopf: Idiot, asshole or moron
Halt die Schnauze: Rude term for 'Shut up' ( I think)
Sie: You (as long as the S is capitalized it means you)

P.S My sister's literally been watching Pitch Perfect for a WHOLE week straight and now I can't help but feel a little bit of it in this particular chapter.

You, Poland and Lithuania are officially known as 'Team SuperStar'! How cool is that?!

Oh... Cory Monteith's death was a tragedy... if theres any Gleeks reading this... plz no flames because of that... I'm just letting anyone else know because if you're grieving like the rest of us Gleeks than I'm letting you know you're not alone...

The Only Exception: Paramore
Just The Way You Are: Bruno Mars
Bad Romance: Lady Gaga
Bye Bye Bye: Nsync (Hope you haven't forgotten them!)
Warrior: Ke$ha
Kryptonite: 3 doors down (they're good too)
Primadonna Girl: Marina And The Diamonds
Without You: David Guetta
I Can Do Better: Avril Lavinge, baby

Whew! That's a LOT of songs, too much. I'm sorry if the contest was a bit wierd or if it was all over the place, it's kind of like how good can you sing and how you can adapt to singing a different genre or something like that. I thought it was kinda fun to write though.

Another thing... I'm sorry if this one kinda sucks... and any OOCness that may have been present...

Picture belongs to original artist
Hetalia belongs to Hidekaz Himayura

Here are the chapter links right here:…

Here's an Extra little bit starring the A.S.K!:

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Yuki-chan74 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
That's so weird cause When He was singing my only exception, I heard this song today at school 0-0 But I love it!! Good job!!
GeekGurl234 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
This is so amaziiiiing o^o

But I can't stop thinking of the moment when he'll realise I'm a girl I can't wait xD
Lousiey Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Halt die Schnauze: 'shut the fuck up' is one of the translations cx
idontreallyknow13 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student General Artist
You are an amazing writer I like all of the chapters so far! And thank you for introducing me to Marina and The Diamonds I love Primadonna Girl!
luchihahatsune Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
there are so many things i wanna say about this chapter...
Kudryavka Noumi (Crying) [V3] ITS SHO PERFECT!!!Cry forever Pikachu Crying Plz 
13th-Program Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student General Artist
this is so cool! XD 
13th-Program Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student General Artist
this is so cool!!!! XD
07Liechtenstein20 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Marina And The Diamonds!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

UndertakerMikki Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I cant help but seriously nearly DIE laughing at Gilbert yelling at himself internally with "NEIN!! NO GAY THOUGHTS!!"

TerraAreli Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can imagine him trying to bat the thought away that only he can see 
Go Away 
UndertakerMikki Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! Haha! Then getting weird looks and he just says "Fuck you, I'm awesome!" And running off or something haha
TerraAreli Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehehe yea owo
He's probably going to murmur somewhere that
"i'm too awesome to be gay! I'm too awesome to be gay!"
UndertakerMikki Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
G-creator Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am curious y nobody used this:iconrightarrowplz::icontoolongdidntreadplz:
No offence:iconisayplz:
Sunflower826 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
I actually started listening to avril lavigne because of this ..deviation?but...WHERE AM I GOING?GIL WHERE ARE U GONNA REALISE IM A GIRL?
FlyingSushiRabbit Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Sie in German means they. du/wie means you
TheEvilSpirit Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
Sie is also you but then formal. Also I've never heard 'wie' for you. xD at least that's what they teach me in German classes
A-chan-The-Great Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh I know, it's just that the reader was being silly and just yelling fake and/or gibberish in German to get Adrian to shut up, lol. .: giggle :.
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That competition went really well I laughed when Arthur sneezed on Adrian
Sammitsuki Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Writer
yaaaay marina!!!! :D 
also wow this story is super addicting
i think i said this before but you're a really talented writer
it's probably because you keep the action going and you know exactly where to stop the story so that the cliffhanger isn't disappointing, but instead makes you want to come back for more. I've only read a few fics that were like this, really addicting, full of action, etc etc, plus i love singing to this chapter was super cool :3
woop, now im talking too much >n< well, keep up the good work!
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Loved it XD
ImAwesomeJDC Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! THIS STORY IS AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!!!!! HOW CAN U SAY THAT IT SUCKS??? ITS A-W-E-S-O-M-E-L-Y   A-M-A-Z-I-N-G ! ! ! I love it so much and IM excited for chapter 19!!!
Ilovehetalia1234 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
You should use ooh la la I think the song would fit

PandaKnight07 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is probably one of the best reader x Prussia fics I have ever read! You are an amazing writer and it is so much fun to read! I don't know if it's just me, but I like the lengthyness?(lol what's spelling?) of the chapters, because I feel like stories with short chapters could give a bit more. Thanks for all your hard work and I can't wait for the next chapters! 
Ayano-Otori Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm really loving this story so much! You are really good. ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapters.
RelicRaisins Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
When the reader starts having Prussia problems she should sing Whiskey Problems (Just a suggestion)
InvaderWitchKazu Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I need to sing the party rock anthomy
Fishyfan101 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013   General Artist
Meh- where is the next chapter! Lol- I know, I'm impatient. This series is just so epic though!
rnckenzie Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
Nanaohf Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
afsghfhsgfjshasg this story is so AWESOME!!!La la la la  Can't for next chapter!!!
Diskuli Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist
I can't wait for the next chapter ;C Prussiaaa, I know you want meh~ Tho, I am a bit scared of you because of the last story I read... Oh well!
rainbowthehedgehog13 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love love love this! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Calexy Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer

This never fails to make my day :heart: :heart: :heart:

Thank you so much for writing this. :D :D :D

HiddenTourturedHeart Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg cnt wait 4 more!
BladeNakomi Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm going to kick adrain's ass. wanna come watch? Hehehehe! Love the music, the stuff I knew anyway, which was most of it. Keep up the awesome work! :D
Me: Don't you dare say any thing gilbert! Or I will get a frying pan and use your head for batting practice!!!!
Gilbert: Nyaa! Not mein awesome head! NEIN! NEIN! NEIN! (Runs away and hides)
OtakuHetalia Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love you author-chan !!!! :iconcryingplz: abd i would be sadistic to gilbert xD
Fishyfan101 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013   General Artist
I love this story so much! I hope you put out the next part soon <3
mikides Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Artist
Girr I rove zhis story but you have no idea how many times I just wanted to punch zhat guy zhe face (Is not AWEsome so I am never going to say or type his name) and and knowing me I vould have kirred him at the Felik part. ROVE ZHIS SO MUCH~! :iconyayprussiaplz: :iconyaypolandplz: :iconyaygermanyplz: :iconyaylithuaniaplz: (and good job Engrand~ :iconyayenglandplz:
myheartwillbreak Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
When I saw the first lyric to The Only Exception, I loved you 20% more. <3 PARAMORE FOREVER
kittymeepgmailcom1 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
'Oy, I can't wait for more, \( > 7 <)9 ,even though I basically stayed up all night reading this, this is such an AWESOME story... I can't help but squeal so more,please continue writing!    
Istoleurcookies4o8 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconfacedeskforeverplz: Darn you cliffe! I just.... :iconinternalconflictplz: don't know what to do anymore!...:iconwalkofwoeplz: * walks to emo corner * :iconfrancesulkplz:
DestinyRose4187 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Yay! :D Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! >:3
artistreilly421 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Facepalm   oh Gilbert .... 
AskAkashiLio Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student Artist
((omg~ i LOVE your stories!!!))
QueenOfHeartsxAlice Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
A great chapter as always, A-chan!
TeraZyy Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

 I feel sorry for Gilbert, oh, if only he knew. Thanks for commenting on my quote, and keep being more awesome than Prussia!Nod
emlzthenerd Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
Seriously though!! I bet Gilbert will be happy when he finds out the reader is a girl..... 
TeraZyy Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
 After the shock, yes.
InvaderWitchKazu Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dudes if he finds out he is going to rape the reader
TeraZyy Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
  I sure hope not! I hope that after many cracktastic adventures, they'll live happily ever after with thirteen of Gilbert's mini-mes. :D
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